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Nowadays,there are lots of dishonest situations.some people believe that honesty is one of the best national qualities.If everyone can hold this custom,our society will be more civilized and concoedant.We will also possess a happy life.Others don't think so.They sense that if you are honest,others ,of course,will cheat you. Today, society has been becoming a material place,thereare so many unfair phenomeny.