句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;文章层次较为清晰;请注意分段。
Nowadays,there are lots of dishonest conditions.Some people believe that honesty is one of the national virtues.If everyone can hold this custom,our society will be more civilized and concordant.We will also possess a happy life.Others don't think so.They sense that if you are honest,others ,of course,will cheat you.Society has been becoming a material air recently,there are so many unfair phenomeny.