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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；能够使用一些简单的从句。
The pictures above vividly describe students on the university are using the average of computer time ,which two hours in 1990,and four in 1995,fourteen in 2002.It is a trend of increasing.The picture,at the first glimpse ,seems to be simple, but only a penetrating sight can pierce through its superficial meaning. The reason of those varies are fallowing.Firstly,the internet are more purpose than before;secondly,the price of computers are decrease in decade; thirdly,it is necessary for individual on learning during the time of knowledge explore. For my part,there is a significant issue to the undergraduates that most of them are using computer to play games or look television .they should use the new invention on learning or concern the things all over the world.
