题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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如果增加些复杂句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
As we all know,trusting is the key to building the relationship.So it is very importance on maintaining trust. Some of us may feel it is hard for us to trust stranger and do not want to help someone else that we do not know.And all of us do not want thing likes that happent to ourselves.What we can do is keep trust on each other.In order to maintain trust,we should do the following things.First,we should learn to help people who needs help.Secondly,being friendly and ofent smile.Last but no least,being honest and do not lie to anyone. As far as i am concerned,trust is very important,only by maintaining trust,can we have a better life.