2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer and man Nowadays,computer is becoming more and more popular.Computer is playing an indispendsable role in human life. Can man be controlled by computers?The answer is negative.Althought the computer works more efficient than human's mind,the computer lacks of creativity.Computer can only work under the human' control. There is no doubt that computer will become promising.With the help of it,we can do a lot of things.