小学二年级英语作文:A Trip

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In few days later,I will graduated for my college ,It is a sad vacation.So i want to go out to make myself happy,may i have the trip with my roommate or just myself.I want to have a fantastic holiday,when and where i though about it ,that i was happy. I never been to beach,