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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33544
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;有效的运用了一些复杂句;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

用户练习作文:

Is It Wise For Students To Save Money? Recently, is it wise for students to save money has brought into force. Different people have different opinions. Some people think it is wise to save money because we should not waste our money. However, the other people think it is not a good thing because it may cause students to buy plenty of cheap but useless goods. As far as I concerned, I would prefer to the former. For one thing, save money is a good habit which is told by our parents from our childhood. And I do think save money have a lot of advantages. A good case of point is that we can building our awareness of future life. Nobody know how their life would be in the future, so it is vital for us to planning for the future life. For another thing, save money does not mean we can only buy some bargains. In reality, save money is a sense of planning for the future and in order to avoid the unnecessary expenditure. It does not means that we cannot buy some thing which is useful but in a high price. The thought of save money, which is definite into a absolute behavior of do not use money, is wrong because it misunderstand the meaning of "save". Save means do not waste money at the unnecessary aspects, instead of a simple and absolute condition of do not buy expensive goods. From all we discussed above, we can easily draw a conclusion that it is wise to save money and we do need to expand the good habits.

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