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Is It Wise For Students To Save Money? Recently, is it wise for students to save money has brought into force. Different people have different opinions. Some people think it is wise to save money because we should not waste our money. However, the other people think it is not a good thing because it may cause students to buy plenty of cheap but useless goods. As far as I concerned, I would prefer to the former. For one thing, save money is a good habit which is told by our parents from our childhood. And I do think save money have a lot of advantages. A good case of point is that we can building our awareness of future life. Nobody know how their life would be in the future, so it is vital for us to planning for the future life. For another thing, save money does not mean we can only buy some bargains. In reality, save money is a sense of planning for the future and in order to avoid the unnecessary expenditure. It does not means that we cannot buy some thing which is useful but in a high price. The thought of save money, which is definite into a absolute behavior of do not use money, is wrong because it misunderstand the meaning of "save". Save means do not waste money at the unnecessary aspects, instead of a simple and absolute condition of do not buy expensive goods. From all we discussed above, we can easily draw a conclusion that it is wise to save money and we do need to expand the good habits.