2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

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Actions speak louder than words. All of us are consider creating a green campus as important. However, a green campus does not only means green environment. A green campus even means an excellent spirit. In order to create a green campus,we ought to protect the environment,plant numerous trees and flowers.The most important thing is that we must obey the school rules and we should improve our personal training,foster all kinds of knowledge.Last but not least, we ought to help other persons who are in troubles and we should foster good habits .I confirm if we can stick to doing good deeds,we will become a good person. In short, i think create a green campus need everyone's efforts, as college students, we ought to try our best to create a green campus.If we strict with ourselves,our earth will become better and better.