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we all know that every year there will be thousands of people traveling to China from different places,especially during the holidays.So tourism has become a booming business in china during the several years.While there are so many people argue that tourist will bring more harm to the environment when it takes profits to our country and that is also my idea. For one thing,when people have a tour,they usually take some food in case there are some accident but they always litter everywhere,which has caused some troubles for both the cleaner and the tourists.For another,more and more people prefer to drive their private cars to travel around for its convenient so people always get into a trouble of the traffic jam and the considerable number of cars will give off lots of gas which will pollute the air.So there is no doubt that we should restrict the numbers of tourists from different perspectives such as charging fees for people's pollution. From the forgoing,we can easy draw a conclusion that tourism will bring more harms to the environment although it also promote the development of some poor region.So both the government and people should take some measures to keep the balance between tourism and pollution.
