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文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Are dialects just as acceptable in public places? Actually I can't agree with that. In public places, there are many peoples from different city, and as you know, almost of them have their own dialects and sounds, if everyone use their own dialects in the public places, people can't communicate with each other. So it is necessary to use the Mandarin in the public places.
