2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

With the rapid development of modern society and science technology,people's live better,more and more people choose to go shopping online.Some of them are very concerned about this,some people think there are many advantage are convenience,reliable and so on.However,some people think the quality of goods of online are not guarantee. As a matter of fact,anything all have two espect,which have advantage and disadvantage. We should be aware of about this view,I think.And more secienfitic to elect how to go shopping on online,what's more, more understand about acknowlage of online shopping.At the same time,we should have responsebility on our mind to make online envieroment better,refuse dangerous imformation and ..