2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。

Nowaday, computer have became the most important segment in people's life . Even people can do nothing without computer. For example, college students and professores search for sources and save the draft by using computer; Engineer compile programs though computer. They can't find a better things instead of it. However,do computer really be benefits for human being always? "of course not " the answer is. When we use computer too frequantly or too long time every times, it will do harmful to our body. That's why we usually feel tired teriously after using computer. And more and more often computer used, the more and more terible memory we have. So computer can help us in many parts of our life, at the same it changes us to the contrast quietly. It is very important to us that when we should use it and when not.