题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nowaday, computers have become the most important segment in people's life . Even people can do nothing without a computer. For example, college students and professores search for sources and save the draft by using a computer; Engineer compile programs though a computer. They can't find a better things instead of it. However,do computers really be benefits for human being always? "Of course not " the answer is. When we use computers too frequently or too long time every times, it will do harmful to our body. That's why we usually feel tired teriously after using computer. And more and more often computers used, the more and more terrible memory we have. So computers can help us in many parts of our life, at the same it changes us to the contrast quietly. It is very important to us that when we should use it and when not.