题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误。
Nowadays, computers have become the most important segment in person's life . Even a person can do nothing without a computer. For example, college students and professor search for sources and save the draft by using a computer; Engineer compile programs though a computer. They can't find a better things instead of it. However,do computers really be benefits for human being always? "Of course not " the answer is. When we use computers too frequently or too long time every times, it will do harmful to our body. That's why we usually feel tired seriously after using computers. And more and more often computers used, the more and more terrible memory we have. So computers can help us in many parts of our life, at the same it changes our behave into the contrast quietly. It is very important to us to know when we should use it and when not.