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Yesterday I received a pack from a courier,in which put a inflatable doll I bought from the web.I took it to my room as soon as possible and opened it,then I found a delicate box painted a portrait of a cute blond girl(totally naked of course),I’m so exciting that a part of my body reacted.But the next second I’m disappointing because inside the box it is merely a ugly doll made of plastic and slicone gel,not a seductive one I had seen from the website. What do you think I’m talking about?It is an example of the phenomenon prevailing in our society:Excessive Packaging.Why it happened,why a customer who want a sexy man-made lady got a well-designed box and a ugly doll?Because those greedy companies tricked us for more benifits.by producing over-packaging goods,they attracted our attention and stimulated our purchasing desire,and successfully separated money from us in the end.Why they are so successful?Because some of us(including me sometimes) are so foolish that they believed those bullshit such as excessive packaging equal to highly quality,sometimes they like packaging more than the product itself. The excessive packaging lead to abysmal consequences,including unnecessary consumption,the loss of scarce natural resource,environment polution,financial disparity,economic depression,etc.It is too terrible to put up with,the greedy capitalist must be punished,the foolish people must be guided,the society must be saved,by the omnipotent and omniscient government.Please,teach us,help us,make the law to restrict our conduct,slap us on our face and we will certainly appreciate it.As for me,I personally want a inflatable doll without any package,totally naked!
