单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;结构不严谨,行文不流畅;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend.He likes to study and play football.He study hard and he likes reading very much.We go to school every day.One day,when we on the way to school,he find a man stole things.He find a police to catch him.What a good man he is!So, I think I should learn the good thing from him.