2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；作者词汇量比较丰富，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活，但要避免出现拼写错误。

As the humorous saying says,"Quitting smoking is easist thing in the world.I 've done it hundreds of time."It is obvious that nothing succeeds without a strong will. As staded in the previous paragrath,a strong will is dispeusable to us.What is the reason for this opinion?Mainly there are two reasons to prove my idea.First of all,a stong will can develop our confidence which make much sense to us.More importantly,hardly can we focus on the amusement.A strong will have a dramatic effect on making us to take great pains to accomplish our ambitious. Therefore,in my opinion,we had better assign much significance to foster a strong will. Finally,there is a will,there is a way.