2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇丰富度要加强；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章层次较为清晰。

As the humorous saying says,"Quitting smoking is easist thing in the world.I 've done it hundreds of time."It is obvious that nothing succeeds without a strong will. As stated in the previous paragraph,a strong will is disposable to us.What is the reason for this opinion?Mainly there are two reasons to prove my idea.First of all,a stong will can develop our confidence。 which make much sense to us.More importantly,hardly can we focus on the amusement and we will always work take great pains in order to achieve our goal. Therefore,in my opinion,we had better assign much significance to foster a strong will. Finally,there is a will,there is a way.