文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;全文结构较为严谨。
As the proverb goes,"Quitting smoking is easiest thing in the world.I 've done it hundreds of time."It is obvious that nothing succeeds without a strong will. As stated in the previous paragraph,a strong will is vital to us.What is the reason for this opinion?Mainly there are two reasons to prove my idea.First of all,a strong, which make much sense to us,not only develop our confidence but also face the difficulties bravely. More importantly,hardly can we focus on the amusement and we will always take great pains in order to achieve our goal. Therefore,in my opinion,we had better assign much significance to foster a strong will.What i write this article is a my personal view. Finally,where is a will,there is a way.