2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者词汇表达比较灵活多变，尤其是学术词汇使用较恰当；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

As the proverb goes,"Quitting smoking is easiest thing in the world.I 've done it hundreds of time."It is obvious that nothing succeeds without a strong will. As stated in the previous paragraph,a strong will play an important role when you come to the top and is vital to us.What is the reason for this opinion?Mainly there are two reasons to prove my idea.First of all,a strong, which make much sense to us,not only develop our confidence but also face the difficulties bravely. More importantly,hardly can we focus on the amusement and we will always take great pains in order to achieve our goal. Therefore,in my opinion,we had better assign much significance to foster a strong will. Finally,where is a will,there is a way.