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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章用词太过单一，要仔细检查单词拼写；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
hello! I have learned that your company'products number was 5670 in the exhibition in New York during december5th to 22th。I'm really interested in it,so wounld you mind sending your price and instruction to me。Thanks very much for your being my partner and i'm hoping eagerly that we can establish business relationship.
