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2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:39浏览次数:8752
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题目 Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will
要求
1.坚强的意志是成功的重要保证
2.意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命
3.学生也是这样,不刻苦学习,终究不会成为有用之才
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分86.5分
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拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

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As the proverb goes,"Quitting smoking is easiest thing in the world.I 've done it hundreds of time."Mention it and we are likely to draw that nothing succeeds without a strong will. As stated in the previous paragraph,a strong will play an essential role when we want to come to the top and is vital to us.So what reason can support this view?Mainly there are two reasons to reflect what it means to us.Above all,a strong will, which makes much sense to us,not only develops our confidence but also can help us to face the difficulties bravely. More importantly,hardly can we focus on the amusement and we will always take great pains in order to achieve our goal. Therefore,in my opinion,we had better assign much significance to possess a strong will,and The one who wants to achieve success very crucial. Overall,where is a will,there is a way.

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