2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高，学术词汇的积累上也要再接再厉；作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

With the rapid development of modern society and science technology,people's live better,more and more people choose to go shopping online.Some of them are very concerned about this,some people think those are many advantage are convenience,reliable and so on.However,some people think the quality of goods of online are not guarantee. As a matter of fact,anything all have two aspects,which have advantage and disadvantage. We should be aware of about this view,I think.And more scientific to choose how to go shopping online,what's more, more understand acknowlage of online shopping.At the same time,we should have responsibility on our mind to make online environment better,refuse dangerous information and ect.