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As the proverb goes,"Quitting smoking is easiest thing in the world.I 've done it hundreds of time."Mention it and we are likely to draw that nothing succeeds without a strong will. As stated in the previous paragraph,a strong will play an essential role when we want to come to the top and is vital to us.So what reason can support this view?Mainly there are two reasons to reflect what it means to us.Above all,a strong will, which makes much sense to us,not only develops our confidence but also can help us to face the difficulties bravely all the way. More importantly,hardly can we focus on the amusement and we will always take great pains in order to achieve our goal. Therefore,in my opinion,we had better assign much significance to possess a strong will and the one who wants to achieve success is quite crucial. Overall,where there is a will,there is a way.There is nothing difficult in the world, if you make up your mind to do it, you will certainly accomplish your end. That stands to reason.So as for students like us, we should have a good attitude towards failure. Facing with difficulties and failures,we keep heads up and never give up
