初中英语命题作文真题演练(97):华南虎

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The South China tiger was in danger.Because of too much hunting.Th number of South China tigers were very few. It was a great pity for us.With the hurt heart,we did something for them.For example,our government protected them from hunters in Baishanzu Nature Reserve,Zhejiang.We said no to tiger's fur and meat.Nowadays it is about 30-60.It cheers us on to do more for tigers.We believe it will be better and better.