初中英语命题作文真题演练(97):华南虎

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The South China tiger was in danger.Because of the too much hunting.The number of South China tiger was very few. It was a great sadness.So we did something for them.For example,our government protected them from hunters in Baishanzu Nature Reserve,Zhejiang.We said no to tiger's fur and meat.Nowadays it is about 30-60.It cheers us on to do more things for the tigers.We believe it will be better and better.