小学三年级英语作文:My school

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We all know that ,our new president XIJINGPING came up with the dream of the chined is a dream of national strength,prosperity and people's happiness on the third plenary session of the eighteenth.I always ask myself ,what can i do for our great chinese dream .First of all ,let's talk aboult my dream .My dream ,it is to be a taeacher ,because i think the teacher educate studnts,so that students can learn more cultural konwledge and become a pillar of the country .In order to achieve my dream,i must strive to learn ,to achieve my dream ,no matter what difficulties but hold on. As a new generation of college student ,every one have shouldering the great historical missio of making our country strong and powerfui,so every one should have a dream ,have faith ,hace pursuit,because have the dreame to pay of the action and effort ,instand every stage of life we need to dream ,the dream need to insit on and exploration. at he same time ,each of us dreams get together is likely to become the chinese dream . Fially ,i believe that as long as all of us unite together and perform our own funcions,we must be able to realize our great dream --the chinese dream.