作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
As the old saying goes: no pain, no gain. As time goes by, we have learned many things from our past time, especially our failures and success. I would like to take my own experience as an example. When I was young, I am not good at English and my English performance is very poor. In the class, I can not understand what the teacher said; and after the class, I can not finish my homework. But I know, I must learn English well! So, I make good use of my time to study English. About one year, I made the great progess. No matter what we do, we should always remember that where there is a well, there is a way.