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There is an old saying: a friend in need is a friend indeed. But with the development of the society, there is a hot topic that whether financial disparity affects friendship or not. Some people hold the view that financial disparity would influnce friendship. To be honest, I disagree with it. The reasons are as follows. As far as I am concerned, a friend in need is a friend indeed. what a true friend concerned is their friends' characters instead of wealth. On the one hand,
