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2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(1):Smoking cause a lot of troubles nowadays

发布时间:2014-02-18 16:41浏览次数:900
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请以Smoking cause a lot of troubles nowadays为主题句和以下提示写一个60个词左右的段落。
提示:
1.吸烟人患各种疾病;
2.乱扔烟蒂会使公共场所肮脏,甚至引起火灾;
3.吸烟经常使非吸烟者恼火;
4.早该采取措施来反对吸烟。
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。

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With the develpment of the society, there are more and more begin to smoke. As is known to us, smoking has a various of negative effects. For one thing, smokers are more easily got disease because of the smoking. For another, it may cause fire if some smokers threw cigerare in the pubilc. In addition, smoking makes others feel uncomfortable. As far as I am concerned, it is high time that we took some measure to aginst smoking. Only if we take some measures, will our world become more and more beautiful.

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