作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
With the develpment of the society, there are more and more begin to smoke. As is known to us, smoking has a various of negative effects. For one thing, smokers are more easily got disease because of the smoking. For another, it may cause fire if some smokers threw cigerare in the pubilc. In addition, smoking makes others feel uncomfortable. As far as I am concerned, it is high time that we took some measure to aginst smoking. Only if we take some measures, will our world become more and more beautiful.