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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；熟练使用了一些长难句；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
I was once asked why i need to attend the university, as far as i could remember, my answer was that my college prepares me for my future life. Yes, it is. College years play a very important part in equipping me for the society in three aspects.The college years equipped me with basic theoretical knowledge that can guide me in the social practical field. The college taught me how to think and solve the problem in the reality. The college life years taught me somehow how to adapt to the society easily when i graduate from the college. For the 4 college years, i learned from teachers and the professors lots of my major knowledge and equipped myself with these knowledge to get to know better how to perform in the real society. Theory is to guild the practice and the practice is to test the theory. Having the theory to guide me in the practical world, i think my future will be bright, at least i won't fell at loss when i step into the society. The most important thing in the college years study is learn how to think and solve the problem. Teachers can give me the answers to the questions in the text books and help me to pass the final exam of each semester, but if i lack of thinking and i don't know how to think, then i can't never find the solutions to the problem when i step into the society, which will result in a bad future life for me. So learning how to think in the society has equipped me the basic ability to think and tackle the practical problem. For me, college is a small society, a lot of student organizations and activities are popular among students, i have joined some student organizations and participated in some activities, they are helpful as i learned how to cooperate with each other, that's the team work spirit, which holds a very important position in the companies nowadays. Also, i learned how to get on well with different kinds of people, to get as much as information that is useful, the ability to communicate with people and to gather useful information is needed most in the companies today. To sum up, colleges years is very important and have prepared me with some basic knowledge for the future life practice, prepared me with the way to think to find the solution to the problems in the future life, prepared me with some of the important skills to live and work in the society. The 4 college years has showed me a way to the future, i'm grateful to it and ready to apply what i have learned in the university to the future practice and begin my new chapter in the society and life.
可可英语 - 划词释义
