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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17432
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
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文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错。

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When it comes to the related to man and computer,people's response vary form person to person.Some people says,computers help us on everywhere during the daily life,such as education,economic ,sports and so on.The reasons can be listed as follows.First of all,we can use computer study;furthermore,we can use it chatting with our friends and family;eventually,we can through it to know the things which happened in the worldwide. Just as an old saying goes,"Every coin has its two sides."On the contrary,others are under the impression that computer has more disadvantages to us.The are some reasons behind this attitude.For one thing many tanagers use computer to play games instead of study.For another ,some people utilize it to deceive the wealth and do some informal things. From what has been discussed above,we may naturally arrive at the conclusion that computer and man is related much closely which like the book and the man.

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