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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似，简历一般包括个人情况，教育背景，个人能力，目标职业等信息。在写简历时，一定要实事求是，不可夸大其词，要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外，还要注意简历的格式和语言，格式要整齐明了，语言要简洁有力。
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。
Hello; My name is Li Ming ,an outgoing boy.my date of birth is 1986 June fifth and unmarried till now.I graduated from the North university of the English major in 2008 july。During my college,all the subjects were great and I had a strong ability to listening,speaking,and writing.Besides,my second foreign language is German (language),so I'm provided with the essential ability to talking in German.In addition to this,I have an intimate knowledge of process of foreign trade.It's sure that I have many hobbies,such that play basketball,sing and watch movies.Now I want to accept an offer of employment of the foreign trade clerk。I extremely hope that you can give me a chance to show myself !
