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Xu Benyu, a young postgraduate of Huazhong Agricultural University, has been elected one of the ten most moving figures of China for the year 2004. Xu was born in Liaocheng, Shandong in 1982. He came to Hubei for his university education. On July 7, 2003, he volunteered to go to Dafang County, Guizhou Province, where people are still too poor to provide proper condition for schools, to help teach the children there. Deeply moved by his good deeds, another five of his classmates and many other university students are willing to come to help the poor children there. Now things have been getting better ever since. Many poor people in the west of China need help. We should learn from Xu, do what we can to help them and make their life improved.
