2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称等相关信息。
作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
Sports in Our School Sports in our school have changed a lot.Now we have more than three P.E. classes a week.and we have at least one hour to exercise every day. Students get so excited at these changes.More and more students take an active part in the ball games,running,and jumping on the playground. Our school life is becoming more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit.What’s more? a healthy body can help us study better and live a happier life.