作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是学术词汇使用较恰当;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
With the development of global economy,the world has became a whole.Chinese culture meets with both chances and challenges.Attacked by the foreign culture,a chinese learning was neglected by students.They spend more time in learning English rather than chinese,thinking chinese is easy and useless. There are tow reasons accounting for this phenomenon.To begin with,the education system places the grade to the first place,while,the exam put more and more emphasis on English.In addition,various of foreign culture in different way affect our daily life,especially to the youth.As time went by,the youth regard the foreign culture as a fashion,in order to show they are catching up with the trend,they invest time to learning foreign language. There is no denying that such phenomenon will lead to couple problems.Firstly,after a long term,it must cause the lost of chinese culture.Futher more,our love to our country may die away day by day. In my opinion,it is necessary to reform the education system,chinese teaching should be improving both in quantity and quanlity.