拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
With the development of global economy,the world has become a whole.Chinese culture meets with both chances and challenges.Attacked by the foreign culture, chinese was neglected by students.They spend more time in learning English rather than chinese,thinking chinese is easy and useless. There are two reasons accounting for this phenomenon.To begin with,the education system places the grade to the first place,while,the exam put more and more emphasises on English.In addition,various of foreign culture in different ways affect our daily life,especially to the youth.As time went by,the youth regard the foreign culture as a fashion,in order to show they are catching up with the trend,they invest time in learning foreign language. There is no denying that such phenomenon will lead to couple problems.Firstly,after a long term,it must cause the lost of chinese culture.Futhermore,our love to our country may die away day by day. In my opinion,it is necessary to reform the education system,the study of chinese should be improving both in quantity and quanlity.