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作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；全文结构较为严谨。
Nowadays the phenomena of excessive packaging of goods clothes becoming more and more popular. It may be attracted to two factors.firstly, a large number of companies believe that they can attract customers' attention and stimulate their purchasing desire by over-packaging their goods, thus gaining more profits. On the other hand, quite a number of consumers mistakenly hold that the more delicate the package is, the better the quality will be, thus encouraging excessive packaging. In my point of view, excessive packaging has disastrous consequences, including the loss of precious resources, excessive consumption of water and energy, and unnecessary extraction of scarce land for landfill. To solve the problem, it's necessary to take the following measures. First, laws and regulations must be made to restrict excessive packaging of companies. In addition, we need to raise consumer's awareness that excessive packaging don't equal to high quality and advocate packaging recycling.
