小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My friend is Tom.he is very handsome ,there are many girl like him.He just like a star in our school .He is one of my best friends. We always play together . His school record is better than me ,but he always teach me where I do not understand the place .Sometimes we go to the cinema to watch movie or go to the swimming in the summer.