2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

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Nowadays,many parents send their children to art schools where children can learn paint, music and other art things. Some people think it is good for children to go to art school, because they can learn more skills and maybe it will be helpful for children's study. They believe that even children are not good at art, it is also promote their ability to things. Others hold the different points. They think take child go to art school early will take much of their time. Children should have time to play games after school, rather than go to art school. As far as I am concerned, I think parents can take their children go to art school to learn some skills. But they should listen to what child really want.