小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My friend is Tom.He is very handsome ,there are many girls like him.He likes a star in our school.He is one of my best friends. We always play together.His school record is better than me,but he always teach me where I do not understand the place.Sometimes we go to the cinema to watching movie or go swimming in the summer.