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2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:33浏览次数:2063
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题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?

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1.对这种做法有人表示支持
2.有人并不赞成
3.我认为…
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Nowadays,many parents send their children to art schools where children can learn paint, music and many arts. Some parents claim it is good for children to go to art school, because they can learn more skills and maybe it will be helpful for children's study. They believe that even children are not good at art, it also promote their ability to learn things. Others hold the different points. They think that taking child to go to art school early will take much of their time. Children should have time to play games after school, rather than go to art school. As far as I am concerned, parents can send their children go to art school to learn some skills. But they should listen to what child really want.

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