题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?
要求
1.对这种做法有人表示支持文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词。
Nowadays, many parents send their children to various art classes, where the kids are expected to learn how to paint, dance, sing or play musical instruments. Some people firmly support these parents. Since the competition among the kids for places in famous primary school is fierce, they see an artistic talent of the kids as an extra advantage in the competition. Furthermore, they claim, even if the kids do not do well in art, the art learning experience may prove useful for their future life. However, others seriously doubt this. They complain that, for those kids who do well in art, art classes have taken up so much of their leisure time that many are leading a very stressful childhood. For those who have no interest in such classes, they are just a waste of time. In my opinion, parents should encourage their kids to take art classes bu at the same time have an open mind about this issue. If the kids is keen on art, art classes are sure to be the first choice. But if the kid hates it,he should not be forced to take them.
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