小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good frend,she is a beatiful gril ,she have a long black hair,two big black eyes,and a red month.her voice is better,she is good at singing,she is clever gril ,she likes reading books,she is also nice,she ofter helps us,our classmate like her very much.The same time,my friend is a good student,she is clever and she is very likes study English.