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2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:11浏览次数:2262
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 
1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率 
2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷,进而影响学习 
3. 你对于网络的看法
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作者用词生动多样,请继续努力,希望能更灵活地使用学术词汇;有效的运用了一些复杂句;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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internet,even a teenage,might be a hacker.There is no doubt that Internet play a important role in our life.with enormous and various informations for searching,Internet makes us study and work more efficiently and easily.What you need to do is simple--just input "baidu" or "google“,and tap the enter key. However,someone worry about that people,especially teenages whom are prone to indugle in internet chat or online game,will eventually ruin their study.The likes of Professor Yang ,who propose to sending the Internet addicts to take a electroshock, is a controversial famous person in china.His view about internet is totally negative,but still supported by some nervous parents. In my opinion,Internet is a tool we can use,not a controller what control us,so it is nonsense to afraid it too much, we should make the most of it,not turn our back on it.

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