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With the rapid development of modern society and science technology,people's live better,more and more people choose to go shopping online.Some of them are very concerned about this,some people think those are many advantage are convenience,reliable and so on.However,some people think the quality of goods of online are not guarantee. As a matter of fact,anything all have two aspects,which have advantage and disadvantage. We should be aware of about this view,I think.And consumers should more sanely to choose how to go shopping online,what's more, more understand acknowledge of online shopping.At the same time,we should have responsibility on our mind to make online environment better,refuse dangerous information and ect.