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i think healthy habits are very important for us. we didn't have good life without health,because if you are sick,you cannot work well ,you cannot enjoy many activities,and you must suffer pain from your sick body,so let us form healthy habits and have healthy life.i think these notices can help us :first, we should have healthy eating habits.you cannot eat junk food ,for example:fried chicken,chips ,pickle,too much candy or cookies and so on.they'll make you fat,and easy to get diabetes or CVD,so keep away from them.the second,we should go to bed and get up early. stable daily routine can refresh you all the day,you can have a clear mind in the work or study instead of fatigue.the last one .it is important to take more exercise,it can make you strong and powerful.so let us work tegother
