题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。
As the high speed development of community ,the trust is especially significant in people's association.Friends'trust,families'trust,colleagues'trust,and so on.Then there is a seriously problem that what the way we should maintain trust people by people. A large of people saying,dependence is to the people what life is to creature.We should believe in our friends ,families,colleagues around world.Only we have confidence in others,they will trust us too.We should not cheat others.The society will harmonious if there is no trickster around worldwide.