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湖南衡阳市八中2013届高三5月月考试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:12浏览次数:1343
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an English composition on the topic of Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚
2.网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题

3.你的建议

注意:字数:100左右。可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。

用户的作文(系统评分60.0分
评语:

作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达,但词汇拼写要更加认真。

用户练习作文:

Online Shopping As the economy developing,online shopping is getting more and more popular,Even office and goverment workers, students ,free workers,ect all like to buy things online.Me is one of them. I like to buy life things online,because I think it is conveniet and cheaper.I am a free worker at present ,I do not have enough time to go out for shopping.Sometime I spent some time going shopping,but I bought nothing that I like,so I think it is waste my time,and I like online shopping more.As the time past online shopping is gettng more and more conveniet and popular. Online Shopping has more good advantages ,but it also has some bad problems.For exam sometime we will be cheat by some bad seller,and got some bad goods.Sometime when we buy clothes and shoes we can not try them on,and we can not have a happy buying, and so on. Although online shopping has some problems,I believe it will get better in futuer.

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