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作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少；连词使用偏少。
Dear Lora, I am happy to receive you letter as to your problem about part-time job. As time goes by, the summer vacation is coming, and lots of students prefer to find a part-time job during the the summer vacation. To tell the truth, students can benefit a lot from part-time job. It can broaden their horizons and enrich their life. On the contray, Lora's parents do not agree with her. As far as they concerned, doing part time job is a waste of time and it may influent your study. In my opinion, I support you idea. No matter how, you can learn how to independence form you parents. So, just do what you want to do.
